Sorry My Friend
Posted on: 21 January 2007
- In: poetry
- 11 Comments
The silence hung between us
A glaring gap
A little lull
No
A great big yawning hole
Words deserted me
Wit, wisdom gone
Intent to cheer
Heart sincere
But, dimwitted
Mind died
Merely meekly mumbled
Goodbye
copyright 2007 ann raven
11 Responses to "Sorry My Friend"
2 | Anonymous
21 January 2007 at 12:38
Oh have I ever been THERE!
I’m glad your mind came back however, to give us this verse.
Tom
4 | ann
22 January 2007 at 08:57
Sam and Tom… because we have all have something in common and jal… thank you
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My friend, if you come by, I hope you’re well and truly on the road to recovery xx
5 | samuru999
22 January 2007 at 13:15
It is sad, Ann, but you did a wonderful job on this poem!
Margie
6 | Brian
22 January 2007 at 14:50
(((Ann)))
In answer to your questions, no and no. š¦
Yes I am at work, I have missed five days already this month, I can’t afford more time off. I have lost my voice today and there is chaos in my head.
Other than that I am fine.
8 | Brian
22 January 2007 at 17:59
I forgot to mention that I love your new avatar. š Rosy cheeks and all that. š
10 | Anonymous
22 January 2007 at 22:50
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Good Luck!
11 | Jane Poe (aka Deborah)
23 January 2007 at 00:55
An ode to withering friendship … well done that. Much Peace, JP
at home with ann 
21 January 2007 at 04:02
My feelings exactly – how did you know?