55 flash fiction in haiku
Posted on: 17 May 2007
- In: poetry
- 9 Comments
fits most anything
fine the biggest lie of all
conceals so much more
it’s the tone you know
says one thing means another
leaves sour taste in mouth
the dated cliché
what you see is what you get
don’t believe a word
wolf in sheep’s clothing
no more flavour of the month
wolfing fresh delights
copyright 2007 ann raven
9 Responses to "55 flash fiction in haiku"
4 | trinitystar
27 May 2007 at 01:13
Well done Ann … seems like you are a Jack of all trades so to speak … Im impressed … I find writing Haiku quite difficult … to give it a meaning with short lines. great stuff!
6 | Rose Dewy Knickers
2 June 2007 at 11:35
((((Ann)))
Don’t you mean that we are working? 🙂
I posted a story today.
Rose
xo
8 | gel
6 June 2007 at 11:08
Flows well! (I’ve never done a 55)
Terrific topic choice. I despise that “fine” response/comment…..
9 | eric313
18 June 2007 at 18:47
I love the last section, the wolf devouring fresh delights, as you put it. Beautiful lines!
at home with ann 
18 May 2007 at 02:34
Ann, Great Job!!
You catch on real quick…xoxox