at home with ann

55 flash fiction in haiku

Posted on: 17 May 2007

fits most anything
fine the biggest lie of all
conceals so much more

it’s the tone you know
says one thing means another
leaves sour taste in mouth

the dated cliché
what you see is what you get
don’t believe a word

wolf in sheep’s clothing
no more flavour of the month
wolfing fresh delights

copyright 2007 ann raven

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9 Responses to "55 flash fiction in haiku"

Ann, Great Job!!
You catch on real quick…xoxox

Bravo Ann. You are such a sexy writer. 🙂

Rose

xo

Wonderful set of ku! I love how these flow. xx, JP

Well done Ann … seems like you are a Jack of all trades so to speak … Im impressed … I find writing Haiku quite difficult … to give it a meaning with short lines. great stuff!

Ann…..Are you on Holiday?
Certain people miss you….
xoxox

((((Ann)))

Don’t you mean that we are working? 🙂

I posted a story today.

Rose

xo

:)…hey your good at this!

hugs
Liz

Flows well! (I’ve never done a 55)
Terrific topic choice. I despise that “fine” response/comment…..

I love the last section, the wolf devouring fresh delights, as you put it. Beautiful lines!

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