Posted by: ann on: 17 September 2007
RICH THICK STICKY RED
RIPPED TORN THROWN OUT DRIP-BY-DRIP
LIFE TRODDEN PUDDLE
Copyright 2007 ann raven
1 | eric1313
18 September 2007 at 09:04
So very vivid is this word portrait of pain…
Hope you’re alright, Ann.
wow. I hope this is just a memory.
2 | eric1313
18 September 2007 at 09:16
and by the way…
You’re a lot more than a wannabe. Your free verse is actually quite valuable, my friend. Glad you share it…~free~
3 | Brian
18 September 2007 at 12:38
Vivid and deep.
4 | Jane Poe (aka Deborah)
20 September 2007 at 15:28
what a richly worded poem … love the pics to match! xx, JP/deb
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