So…
Posted on: 20 September 2007
- In: poetry
- 3 Comments
one solitary tear
slides down her nose
she holds back the rest
… so perplexedcomprehension
slowly washes over her
she was a plaything used
… so confused
the friendly banter
the mild flirtation
with overtones of much more
… so unsure
.
they’re all the same
nothing changes
men play around
… so confounded
.she thought he was better
than the rest
silly girl, surprise surprise, why
… so mystified
.
.
.
.
copyright 2007 ann raven
3 Responses to "So…"
2 | eric1313
22 September 2007 at 04:18
I ove the varied refrain at the end of each stanza.
So very creative,
and also,
so very truthful.
Your writing is
…so wonderful to read
on a lonely friday night.
3 | eric1313
22 September 2007 at 04:20
Oops… I meant “I love the varied refrain…”
I look down at my keyboard too much and miss the typos in a haste to hit the send button.
at home with ann 
21 September 2007 at 11:47
((((Ann))))
We’ll have to hit the town next month. No more crying, no more wailing; just lots of fun and good times.
Rose
xo