Juicy
Posted on: 24 September 2007
- In: poetry
- 12 Comments
Prompted by One Deep Breath
pink soft luscious lips
lancome’s juicy tubes never
fail to deliver
succulent berries
each slick a juicy journey
chocolate flavour too
girls wanna have fun
yummy juicy fruit lip gloss
good enough to eat
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copyright 2007 ann raven
12 Responses to "Juicy"
2 | Rose Dewy Knickers
24 September 2007 at 11:27
((((Ann))))
your lips are sweet
kisses tender
gotta get me some of that!
Rose
xo
3 | ann
24 September 2007 at 11:28
(((Brian)))
emergency emergency, do you need water, a fan, the kiss of life???
4 | ann
24 September 2007 at 11:33
(((Rose)))
you can share some of mine
the poem was based on true
life experience ;>)
6 | ann
24 September 2007 at 12:04
oh my goodness… I hope I’m not too late… must wipe fruity juicy tube off lips first…
swallow, breathe in, pinch his nose and breathe Brian, breathe… come on
I know, a quick slap round the cheek should do it
ah, you’re awake
7 | Brian
24 September 2007 at 12:10
Oh thank you, thank you sweet vision of hope. I am forever in your debt. How can I ever repay you?
9 | Crafty Green Poet
25 September 2007 at 07:16
lip gloss, a vital juiciness for any woman! Good interpretation of the prompt!
10 | Elween
25 September 2007 at 07:25
do girls really feel comfortable when they put that on? i mean seriously …:)
11 | Greggo
25 September 2007 at 13:40
oh, these are great fun, ann! now i’m craving some juicy kisses! lol.
12 | eric1313
28 September 2007 at 01:05
Very charming. You do haiku much justice, Ann. You combine pictures and words so well. When I started, every piece I wrote, I felt had to have some kind of visual just to make it work.
You don’t need that, but you combine it to stunning effect.
at home with ann 
24 September 2007 at 11:25
*THUD*